in the odd walk of life into the desert of time
the nick of time has got me to the beautiful
emotion of love ..
but sometimes its beyond me to comprehend
the feeling of happiness which love brings in
the silent desert which kills your pace with the
shackles of lonliness and silence...
but in all this happiness and spark of emotions
my mind swiril in confusion the oasis i see in
front may jus be an illusion...or may be i am jus
holdin the sand of time and not realising it flowing
out the more hard i am holding
all this happening in the desert of time and nick
of moments the eyes see the grassland in love but
the dare i have taken too see things big ..but some
where down i have a fear of shattering completly
unknown fact of life n time still amazes in the
walk of life...guess i am the slave of emotions and
my mind..
omethin to me is unacceptable
to my mind but the heart still loves the one it shud)
6 comments:
yeah..i can actually relate to what you've written (like more than often) !! ...how're u doing...? how'd rest of the exams go buddy ?
take care
c ya around
hey prith....how are you doing?keep changing ur url huh?
well i have two things to say on the post.
number one.for the first time i found your post less poignant and more pondered over...this is the change that love gives you,isnt it?a peace...a hope...which comes only when you have a loved one beside you...rt prith?
number two.you said that you feel that time is running away from your hands like the sand...i would like to say...you have got your happiness your love...after a long wait...you know love is eternal...just independant of a trivial thing like time..(trivial not for humans but for love!)it doesnt matter how much time you spend in love....but how deeply you drown in the feeling for that very moment...now that asks you to throw away that sand in your hand and just enjoy the feel of her hand... ;-)
get the point?
hey prith
lord god ...manee's written an amazing thing right here buddy...wow...beautiful thought ..wudn't u say so...i hope u read that and like it..and prith............
all the best (not for the exams buddy but for these new venture in life !! )
take care
well manee
i totally agree with the 1st point but it was there before but i wont write coz of my personal philo..ne how a matter of debate
but the 2nd one its only time i have soooo less to be with her love n do so many more things with her n for her any how thats abt it
take care
thanx for commenting
the deeper the love...the lesser the time seems....
:-)
hmmm....
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